Great job. Even half decent acting but...as is the way with most erotic fighting videos.
They drop the ball, failing to close the show.
For me all fight videos require a stark power imbalance, where one is clearly inferior to the other. Then preferably a period of dominance with a defiant loser trapped but still; initially indignant. Either unable to accept her defeat or just slow to realise the magnitude of her misfortune.
There is no escape for her; it is time to plead for mercy and quit pretending that when her superior bully is satisfied with her her work, she will allow her conquered foe to be her equal.
There is nothing wrong with a bit of defiance by the loser but at some point the winner must break the loser, so we can see the loser go through the trauma of pain, fear & humiliation into desperate pleading of someone truly vanquished.
That is how the best erotic fights should end, with the loser sobbing kissing the winner's feet.
Unfortunately most involve bad acting or proud defiant refusal to express abject surrender when dominated thoroughly.
They drop the ball, failing to close the show.
For me all fight videos require a stark power imbalance, where one is clearly inferior to the other. Then preferably a period of dominance with a defiant loser trapped but still; initially indignant. Either unable to accept her defeat or just slow to realise the magnitude of her misfortune.
There is no escape for her; it is time to plead for mercy and quit pretending that when her superior bully is satisfied with her her work, she will allow her conquered foe to be her equal.
There is nothing wrong with a bit of defiance by the loser but at some point the winner must break the loser, so we can see the loser go through the trauma of pain, fear & humiliation into desperate pleading of someone truly vanquished.
That is how the best erotic fights should end, with the loser sobbing kissing the winner's feet.
Unfortunately most involve bad acting or proud defiant refusal to express abject surrender when dominated thoroughly.